I watch as you take me,
My soul dissapearing,
Fear inside, my heart beats faster,
I hide away what Im feeling,
You left me alone,
In my darkness hour I cried,
6 months now I still have wet eyes,
You drained my blood out of my vains,
Made me cry out,
Im sick of all this pain,
I stabbed myself in the arm,
Watching the blood shine,
Your making blood drain again,
Your vanquishing my soul,
Everyday you change just a little but more,
Everyday my blood tastes all that more warm,
A vampires gotta do what a vampires gotta do,
But why does that vampire have to be you.


Honest please!!! and maybe what I could do to improve it im trying to improve my writing.
And this one!!

Wanting you is harder than I orignally thought,
Sometimes its so easy,
Sometimes its not,
I want you to see me,
Who I really am,
My mask removed,
Just me there,
Nothing to hide,
Almost everything to share,
Everyone sees me as something obscene,
But with you its something else,
You see me,
Tell me, tell me,
What do I need to do,
Can't you see?
I really do love you,
Wanting you is hard than I originally thought,
Sometimes its so easy,
Sometimes its not.

remember Im only 14 so please judge from that level of writing!!

you write kinda like i write haha!
i thought i only wrote about stuff like this

they are really good and also very deep.. keep up the good work dahling.
<3 kayla